Elevator Pitch no.2

On my previous recording I received feedback saying it was a fun watch (yay!) and that my confidence was tangible through the screen (good things, good things), so I made sure to sound just as enthusiastic about my idea as I was when I first started (some things never change, do they?). That was my favorite takeaway: how my excitement was contagious and you could tell I was proud to believe in my goal wholeheartedly. I was also told that I should dive into more specifics about the content itself, but unfortunately I am not allowed to divulge into those little details due to copyright things in the process, but disregarding that, I made sure to keep my main selling points! And I also added more information on what makes my product stand out and be unique.

Take two, aaaaaaaaaand ACTION!




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  1. UnknownOctober 22, 2017 at 10:04 PM

    I was so happy to hear you mention diversity in your pitch! YA genre aside, all forms of art and media need more diversity. I laughed when you mentioned fairy tale retellings, when I was in middle school one of my favorite books was exactly that- a 400 page Twelve Dancing Princesses rehash with sloppily-written romance. My young, uncultured eyes didn't realize the trainwreck I was enjoying, but looking back I can't believe a grown woman wrote that. Ah. I hope you're making good progress!

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  2. UnknownOctober 22, 2017 at 11:31 PM

    I'm glad you're pushing forward on this idea, the genre needs something new. I like this fresh idea instead of the tired old love triangle between three dull white protagonists (see Hunger Games, Twilight, or anything else released in the last 8 years). Great use of hand gestures and tone, the excitement was, in fact, contagious. If you polish this enough, your elevator pitch could be the summary that is put on the back of the book!

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